Follow up on IRON TAMARIKI

                                                IRON TAMARIKI

The iron tamariki is a sports game of swimming and ruining that is in
this book I am reading.This is about a kid doing his running in the first page.
We can see that this boy is tired of running around and around.The man who
is wearing the yellow and black t-shirt is the boys dad.He says when I was 
your age I was like you kid.The boy did not even Believe him.The kid asked his dad how far do you think I can run.The dad did not say a thing.He said do you know Richie McCaw.The kid said yup.The all blacks captain.He is the best.The dad said.He give him a book about him.The kid had readied it.After
all of what happened the kid went swimming for a long time.His mum came came and saw him lose some waste.The kid asked his mum if she was coming .She was not sure if she was or not.He said he was going to do it at napier in December.It was time for the race and the kid was looking at how far he was going to be in the water.He feel so cold because of the water.3 2 1 time to go to the sea.
He was so cold he was go to get used to it.Some people was in fort of him.He did not even care.
It was a few mins and he looked at the back of him
he was wining.He was the first one to get to the beach.

He saw his mum

and he said you came mum.She said go go go the people are coming to you.He made it to the finished ling and he won.He got the gold metal.His dad came and said you did well cuzzie.

He was happy.  

  
                        


                                                       

How to draw a portrait of yourself or your friend

Introduction:

Hey I will be doing a portrait.Now if you do not know how to make to make a portrait then your lucky case I am going to tall you how to draw a portrait.

First:

You will need a paper, pencil,a ruler and a raper. Get your pencil then get your paper to.Then you draw a big circle on the paper.Now you draw dotted lings across the the circle  on the paper you have and then  you do it again but on the top of the circle all the way to the bottom of the circle.

Next:

Now you can draw the eyes.Don`t do it next to the middle of the dotted ling that looks like a t or you will not be able to do the nose.Just make it like two dotted ling away fro the t ling.Now you can do the nose.You can do your friends nose if you are doing you friends your can do you own nose if you are doing it yourself.

Then:When you are done the nose you can do the mouth.Try to do your friends or your own mouth cause it can get hard when you are on the mouth.If you are done the mouth and it was hard or not then good job.Now you can do your eye brows.It is easy as a lemon.

After:When you have draw the eye brows you can start on the eye lashes on your eyes. After you are done doing you eye brows you can do your hair.Now it might be hard for the people who has not been doing hair so you can do it.

Finally:Well that toke me long to get to Finally.Now you are done drawing the hair.Was that hard.Well not for me I am the one.Was it easy for you or hard I do not know of it was hard for you or not hard for you.Now to rab out the dotted ling.The last one is the ears.The ears.IT is so easy to do.The ears.When you have done the ears you have finished the portrait.

   

Well I am done telling you 

how to make a portrait.

Well this my one 

that my friend

did.Here it

is.

This is what my friend did.                                This is what I did.

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What I know about the Common wealth games

K:What I know about the Common wealth games is that it is like a sports game.It is even at the Gold Coast. People like going their I think.I now know that at the Common wealth games their is a big as building over their somewhere.The Common wealth games is a game that people play and win for their team.Poeple like to go to the common wealth games to win or to be the best team mate ever.

W:What I want to know is where is the Common wealth games?

What is the Common wealth games?

Why did they make the Common wealth games?

Who made up the Common wealth games?
Why is their a Common wealth games?

Letter to my mum

Dear Mum

It was a fun time meeting you in the holidays and I wish I can come to you and Kevin.I like going to the pools at Glen field pools.

I like going to countdown and eating  all the apples in the free to eat basket.The thing is I want us to have a big food of KFC with Kevin, you , me , Ariel.Its good.


I like walking around places and play at that place.It is fun when we get to do a family movie time like Paddington or like the  Simpsons.I like the Simpsons.It is fun to watch.I like  to do that again.I hope we get to do it.



xoxo By Tyresse. W   

About me

The holiday

The holiday.

On the day I went to my nana's house I saw my cousin Cooper and has dad.we went to his house and went inside to meet his nana.I went into his room and played some games.When it was night time I went to go back home and have something to eat.After that Ariel and I went to bed at 7.00  because it was going to be a good day.In the morning me and Ariel went to have breakfast.After that we went to play outside and then a few minutes I went to my cousin Nora.When I went into his house Ariel went inside our nana's house.We were watching maona.When it finished Nora and me went to jump.It was so fun that we even got ice cream.I said to Nora I am going back to nana´s house and go see what she`s up to.When I saw her she was all right.Even Ariel was all right.So I went back to jump.I did not see my cousin Nora.I said where are you Nora.For a few minutes I saw him.He was playing with Cooper.I said hi cooper.

On staruday in the holiday

On Saturday for the holidays.

On Saturday Ariel and I were play outside with our cousin.When we were playing with the ball we were playing kick the ball.There were only 2 teams because there were only 4 people in the game.After a few minutes we were getting bored and then we started to play skyland.It was fun.I even liked it because of the cool thing it had.After that we had some lunch and went to the park to play.We saw another park in the big as tree.We went to it to see what it looked like.When we saw it.It looked like a pool a big sled.There were a lot of people there.So we went and had some good fun.It was so cool that I got some ice cream and some lollies.When it was 6.00 we all went back and started to have diner.After that we all went to bed and then went to go to sleep.